ext_201944 ([identity profile] bullygeneraleva.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] damned_institute 2009-07-12 05:12 am (UTC)

Too much dramatic buildup. Like she'd said, there was a fair chance she'd just end up bored, so there wasn't any need for all of this lead-in. The story would stand on its own merits.

"You'll know soon enough if I am," she said. "Let's hear it."

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